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[i]
There are legends here of earthquakes; splits and crevices from feeling far too much
Saying far too little.

[ii]
I took your hand and led you into the garden
(or maybe you led me—with your breath
falling lightly
on my shoulder, it is hard to tell)
And I fell to sleep amongst the venus fly-traps

They turned my way and
Explored—pricked and tasted my blood-and-arsenic
Infusion; curious, hungry, wanting.


When I woke, unrooted, you were twisted in the vines.

Eyes: half-moons seen through maple leaves
Upside down
©2004-2010 ~le-zelle
:iconle-zelle:

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based on a dream--

(yes, I have all of these I want to post up on FP but silly FP is being contrary and frustrating me hugely. damn FP.)

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I wanted to just paste the entire poem as my favourite part then... I had to stop myself!

Goddamn it, I am so jealous. I suck in comparison to this. Why can't I write?! :(
Well done to you though, :D ;)
:iconle-zelle:
YOU DON'T SUCK!! (please don't demean yourself, otherwise I'll have to go into a verylong rant about how stupid and silly I am and how I feel like I have to compensate for something alot of the time whereas you're beautiful in 239473247 ways and write such raw, passioned poetry ((whereas mine always seems so...wierd is the best way to put it, I guess)) and are not so tragically flawed)

SO THERE.

*hugs, kisses and making up (or out, whichever way you want to look at it ;))*

ack! look! here I am with the flirting! Again!!


uck.
:iconpointless-nostalgic:
Making out?! Flirting?!

If I didn't know any better, I'd say you were trying to soil my mind with your dirty thoughts... it's working!!

;) :giggle: :hug: :blowkiss:

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